Words on Women

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So, here’s the thing. I wrote an article. My first article.

I’d like to think it’s not so bad, and I’d like to share it here. Is this what blogs are for? I have no idea what I’m doing, I’m new here. But if anyone would like to read it, I’d love any and all feedback.

Anyway, here she is, click the link below to read it:

What we need to understand about women

“Misconceptions on feminism, domestic violence, assault, and women in general.”

Hope you like it! 🙂

15 thoughts on “Words on Women

  1. Your link above is split into two parts, but both links go to the same place. Unless this is deliberate for some reason I can’t fathom (and if it is I’d like to be edumacated!) then I suggest deleting both links and replacing with just one. I also think you need to make it clearer that the article you’re talking about here is at the other end of the link, because that’s not immediately apparent.

    About the article itself: I like your analogy with rich people; I don’t think I’ve heard of that before. I don’t much care for your choice of bold; I find it distracting. For instance in “The monsters who take advantage of vulnerable women”, why is ‘vulnerable women’ emboldened, but ‘monsters’ isn’t?

    Good work, keep it up!

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  2. I’d say your article is a great start! Good points made. I think you struck a good topic that is a big issue now a days. I also share some article writing on my blog as well if you ever want to check it out. Enjoyed the read!

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